1st paragraph
Who you went with
Where /how you went
My parents and I
went to a mountain village by car last Friday, and it was the worst trip of my
life.
2nd paragraph
Describe your journay
(what happened)
First of all, it was raining heavily and it was very
cold.
On the way there we had a flat type and while my poor
dad was changing the wheel, he got really wet. Guess what happened them? We ran out of petrol! We
were miles from the nearest petrol station, so we had to wait in a cold car for
hours. Luckily a police car came along and helped us.
3rd paragraph
How you felt
I have never felt so cold and scared.
Next time I’ll stay at home.